News Flash: Latest Story at MLive

Here’s my milk shake story, slightly altered for the worse. The first paragraph ends with a sentence that should be attached to the second paragraph; the rhythm is screwy. Also, that should be Bettie Page, not Betty Grable. Sigh. But otherwise, I do think it’s one of my better efforts, considering my food writing is a sidelight only. Click.

One thought on “News Flash: Latest Story at MLive

  1. I liked this one although I gave up shakes when we left the Dairy Queen behind in Dexter. But Dad loves shakes to this day and especially strawberry! LYD GS

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